The description for Banshee Worm King: Book Five of the Oz Chronicles


Coming soon!

For those of you who’ve read/received an ARC of BWK, you may notice that this description isn’t what is on your copy of Book Five.  I hastily threw that description together so I could get the ARCs out ASAP.  Some of you pointed out that you thought it revealed too much.  It did.  So, I’m spending this weekend tweaking it.  My plans are to release the Kindle version of the book this coming week.  I got some great feedback from early readers that included typo alerts.  I’ve addressed those so I’m ready to move forward.  If you’re still reading an ARC and find some typos, please feel free to bring them to my attention.  I may have already fixed them, but you never know.

Here’s the second version of the description:

Oz and his intrepid warriors have survived their harrowing ordeal in the Biltmore House only to find themselves fighting for their lives in the surrounding mountains of North Carolina. A new species of giant worm has evolved in the twisted world of the Storytellers, and they are hungry. A grizzled stranger provides the band of survivors refuge in his labyrinth of treetop walkways. But, they become pawns in a battle between the worms and Myrmidons, and one of them will betray the others. Oz and company will see their numbers dwindle and their hopes for ever making it back home virtually slip away.

What do you think?

UPDATE:

Thanks to my wife, Mia and Peter Ayre – Here is the newer and improveder description:

Oz and his intrepid warriors have survived their harrowing ordeal in the Biltmore House only to find themselves fighting for their lives in the surrounding mountains of North Carolina. Giant worms have evolved in the twisted world of the Storytellers, and they are hungry. A grizzled stranger provides the band of survivors refuge in his labyrinth of treetop walkways. But are they still fighting to return home or have they simply become pawns in a larger battle? Oz and company will see their numbers dwindle and a betrayal from within will see their hopes for ever making it back home virtually slip away.

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2 thoughts on “The description for Banshee Worm King: Book Five of the Oz Chronicles

  1. Are there any core changes between the published copy and the ARC copy? And I like this description. Very intriguing. Would definitely make me want to read it if I hadn’t already.

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